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30 KIM Bob ´äº¯: 2 2016-11-02 35 ´ä±Û

¿µÀÛ ºÎŹµå·Á¿ä û¼ÒÁ» ÇØÁÙ·¡? ƯÈ÷ ¹Ù´ÚÀº °É·¹ÁúÀ» ÇؾßÇØ ¾È±×·¯¸é ¹ßÀÌ ´õ·¯¿öÁ®.

¿µÀÛ ºÎŹµå·Á¿ä û¼ÒÁ» ÇØÁÙ·¡? ƯÈ÷ ¹Ù´ÚÀº °É·¹ÁúÀ» ÇؾßÇØ ¾È±×·¯¸é ¹ßÀÌ ´õ·¯¿öÁ®.

Suri 2016-11-03

Can you please clean up (the room)? (û¼ÒÇÒ Àå¼Ò)
Especially the floor have to be mopped. If not, feet get dirty.

Kylie 2016-11-04

Please clean up XXX (Àå¼Ò). Especially mop the floors. If not, feet will get dirty.

29 ´äº¯: 2 2016-11-02 27 ´ä±Û

1. Á¦°¡ Á¦ÀÏ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â °¡¼ö´Â ¿µ±¹ Ãâ½ÅÀÇ adele ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. 2. adeleÀÇ ¸ðµç ³ë·¡¸¦ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏÁö¸¸ ±×Áß¿¡¼­ 'rolling in the deep'À» °¡Àå ÁÁ¾Æ ÇÕ´Ï´Ù. 3. 2009³â µ¥ºßÇÏ¿© Áö±Ý±îÁö ¸¹Àº »óÀ» ¹Þ¾Ò°í ¼¼°èÀûÀÎ ¹ÂÁö¼ÇÀÌ¡¦

1. Á¦°¡ Á¦ÀÏ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏ´Â °¡¼ö´Â ¿µ±¹ Ãâ½ÅÀÇ adele ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. 2. adeleÀÇ ¸ðµç ³ë·¡¸¦ ÁÁ¾ÆÇÏÁö¸¸ ±×Áß¿¡¼­ 'rolling in the deep'À» °¡Àå ÁÁ¾Æ ÇÕ´Ï´Ù. 3. 2009³â µ¥ºßÇÏ¿© Áö±Ý±îÁö ¸¹Àº »óÀ» ¹Þ¾Ò°í ¼¼°èÀûÀÎ ¹ÂÁö¼ÇÀÌ µÇ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù.

Suri 2016-11-03

1. My favorite singer is Adele from The United Kingdom.

2. I like all songs of Adele, but my favorite one is 'Rolling in the deep'.

3. She has got many prizes since she made debut in 2009 and She has become a worldwide musician.

2016-11-03

1. My most favorite singer is Adele from The United Kingdom. 2. I like all of her songs but I like 'Rolling in the deep' the most. 3. Since she debuted in 2009, she was awarded a lot of different prizes. Now She became one of the international musician.

28 ´äº¯: 2 2016-11-01 43 ´ä±Û

ÃÖ±Ù¿¡ ÇÑ °¡Àå Å« ½Ç¼ö´Â À߸øµÈ °èÁ·Π¼Û±ÝÇÑ °Í ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. Å« ±Ý¾×Àº ¾Æ´Ï¾úÁö¸¸ µ·À» µ¹·Á ¹Þ´Â °úÁ¤ÀÌ »ý°¢º¸´Ù Èûµé¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. ¹øÈ£¸¦ À߸ø´©¸¥ Á¦ Å¿ÀÌ °¡Àå Å®´Ï´Ù. ±× ÈÄ·Î µÎ¼¼¹ø È®ÀÎÇÏ´Â ½À°üÀÌ »ý°å½À´Ï´Ù.¡¦

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Beryl 2016-11-02

The most terrible mistake I did recently was that I sent money to the wrong bank account.
Though It was small amount, the process of getting money back from the bank was pretty tough.
It's almost all my fault because I pressed the wromg account number.
After that I've taken doing double-checking.

2016-11-02

The biggest mistake I made recently was sending money to the invalid(wrong) bank account number. It was not large sum(amount) of money but was hard to get the money back. I know it's 100 % my fault that I had entered the wrong number. After making this mistake, I got into a new habit of double checking everything.

24 ´äº¯: 2 2016-10-28 72 ´ä±Û

óÀ½ ¸¸³ª°Ô µÇ¾î ¹Ý°©½À´Ï´Ù. Á¦°¡ ÇÏ´Â ¿µ¾î°¡ À¯Ã¢ÇÏÁö´Â ¾ÊÁö¸¸ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ °øºÎÇÒ °¢¿À°¡ µÇ¾î ÀÖÀ¸´Ï Àß ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù. Ʋ¸° ¹®¹ýÀ» Àß °íÃÄÁÖ¼¼¿ä.

óÀ½ ¸¸³ª°Ô µÇ¾î ¹Ý°©½À´Ï´Ù. Á¦°¡ ÇÏ´Â ¿µ¾î°¡ À¯Ã¢ÇÏÁö´Â ¾ÊÁö¸¸ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ °øºÎÇÒ °¢¿À°¡ µÇ¾î ÀÖÀ¸´Ï Àß ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù. Ʋ¸° ¹®¹ýÀ» Àß °íÃÄÁÖ¼¼¿ä.

Beryl 2016-11-01

It's my pleasure to take your class.
Even if I can't speak English fluently, I have a confidence to study English hard. Please correct wrong grammar as well.

2016-11-01

I am pleased to have a class with you. I am not fluent in English, but I am willing to learn. Please correct my grammar mistakes and sentences. Thank you!


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